This time I knew it all;

Still I went that way.

Walking on this path, I knew I’d fall;

Still I allowed the demon to play.

I don’t know what happened to me;

In darkness, I was ready to remain.

My own self was the testimony;

To prove that I was ruined again.

I spoilt myself and committed the crime;

Despite knowing it all this time.

I knew that there was no way back;

Once I started the journey.

I was set to take all the flak;

For forgetting my duty.

I was ready to go through pain;

And so, I ruined myself again.

The world not at all knew about me;

For they believed I was the person whom I pretended to be.

Walking this road was not my own choice;

All this time it was the devil’s voice;

Which had been speaking from within.

For I allowed it to take over me;

It made me commit the sin.

But now I wanted to get free;

I wanted to enjoy life’s rain.

I myself was the testimony to prove that I was ruined again.

I wanted to listen to my heart;

And bring peace to my soul;

When my world was ripped apart;

When I was broken into pieces from a whole.

I wanted to resurge and become sane;

For I myself was the testimony to prove that I was ruined again.



PS: Hello people!

This one is a sequel to the previous post. And here’s the link in case you haven’t been through the last one.

Well, I’d love to know your reviews! Drop your feedback in the comments section below and let me know what you feel ’bout this one.😊


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20 Comments Add yours

  1. Susheel says:

    Very nice poetry. Keep the good work on.

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    1. thank you so very much. keep supporting!!


  2. priyanshi gupta says:

    beautiful words!! ❤❤

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  3. Seerat says:

    Beautifully written♥️

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  4. Sunila Khurana says:

    Great poetry riddhima !!👍👍

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  5. Hey Riddhima! Beautiful post 😊
    Also, I just nominated you for The Mystery Blogger Award, I hope you check it out 💜

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    1. Thank you!! I’ll surely check it out !!😊
      Good day!!

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  6. Shruti Ohri says:

    Ohmygod this hit right in the feels ❤

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you so very much !!😊
      Have a wonderful day !!

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  7. SAN_jeet says:

    Good word work


  8. Just amazing piece of writing my dear Riddhima 😇✨. I just loved it ❤️. When did the inspiration for writing this came to you ?

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    1. Thank you so much, Abhijith! I wrote Ruined first where the protagonist didn’t know what she was doing and destroyed her own self. So thought of writing a sequel to it where she knows history was repeating itself and she was on the wrong path but had lost all controls over her own self. And this one happened like this! I then wrote the final part- Rise Of The Ruined where she rises like a phoenix from her own ashes, own ruins to shine like a dynamic star!
      I’m glad you liked this little piece of my writing!

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      1. Wow what a thread !! Absolutely in love with your concepts Riddhima 😊. Write always and let your words shine and touch people’s souls 😇✨

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      2. Ah, thank you!

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