THE RISE OF THE RUINED

Broken and shattered I was left to die

Nobody heard my painful cry

I had no one to speak my heart out to

Nobody knew what I had gone through

I was ruined from deep inside

But all of it, with fake smiles I had to hide

I collected the pieces of my broken heart

Determined I was to give things a fresh start

My dead, hurt soul revived again

My scars weren’t enough to show my pain

My wounds didn’t heal, but I didn’t care

My shattered self was beyond repair

Still I ran hoping to find light

My audacious wings gave me the flight

From my own ashes, I did rise

I was ready to fly beyond the skies

Infinity was my limit

I was no more a marred spirit

I learnt from the dark shadows of yesterday

The light of hopeful endeavours guided my way

To all dreadful things, I bid adieu

I am one of those brightest stars looking at you

With heads held high, folks look up to see

How my sinister past has adorned my beauty

 

-RIDDHIMA

 

PS:

Hey everyone!

So, this is the last and the concluding part to the three-part poem series that I wrote. In case you haven’t been through the previous ones, here are the links:

https://riddhimapenner.wordpress.com/2017/12/11/ruined/

https://riddhimapenner.wordpress.com/2017/12/13/ruined-again/

 

Thank you for reading!😊

23 Comments Add yours

  1. Winnie says:

    Beautifully expressed!

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    1. Thank you Winnie!!😊❤

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      1. Winnie says:

        You’re welcome 😊❤️

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  2. Taru says:

    Such a lovely and beautiful poetry💜

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    1. Thank you so very much😊❤

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  3. saideepti999 says:

    Girl you are so like me….. I also write similar stuff….if you get time, do read my blog….❤❤❤😂😂

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    1. Thank you for the wonderful feedback Saideepti !! Will surely check out your blog !! Thank you so very much for dropping by!!😊❤❤

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      1. Sorry …… Just got to know that it’s Sai Deepti while I stopped by your posts … Btw I love your writings too!! And thank you once again for the follow!!😊❤

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  4. saideepti999 says:

    Ohh!….. You can call me anyway… Thanx to you too ❤❤

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  5. This is stunning. The rhyme scheme, the flow of words and the way it portrays the story of a damaged soul, it’s all too good!
    Loooveed it Riddhima! 💜

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  6. Oh and I just nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award, check it out when you can 😊💜

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    1. Thank you so much!! I am honored !!

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  7. charisma says:

    Riddhima, at such a young age, you are full of beautiful thoughts. You indeed are the shining stars. Don’t let that change about yourself. 😊😊😊 It’s a beautiful poem and I am just happy it ended on the positive note. It just shows how strong u are to face all odds in life. So keep doing that.☺☺☺

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    1. Thank you for penning down such a beautiful comment!! You made me smile!!😊

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      1. charisma says:

        Awww u deserve it all dear. Just keep writing and I’ll be more than happy to leave my feedbacks. 😘😘

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  8. Powerful piece of writing my dear friend ✨👌. I really loved reading it so much !! All your poems are really enriching and after I read them I feel like coming out from a cold splash of water. Your poems make me fresh and alive 😊. Thank you so much and please keep writing Riddhima. I know I have no say in this but as your loyal reader I haven’t seen much posts from you these days. What happened ?

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    1. Thank you for the beautiful feedback!😊 Also thank you for being so honest and frank. Well, even I know I might have disappointed many of my readers and followers by not being active on wordpress since a long time.But it’s just that my exams are going on in school, and as it’s class 10, I wanted to be a bit more serious and focussed so decided not to post for some time! But I assure you that I’d be back soon and that too with many posts for all my lovely readers!😊

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      1. So glad to hear that Riddhima 😊. Wishing you the very best for your exams and hope you will come out with flying colours 😇✨

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      2. Thanks a bunch!😊

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  9. Lace Wigs says:

    Way cool! Some extremely valid points! I appreciate you penning this article and the rest of the
    website is extremely good.

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    1. Thank you so much! I am extremely glad you liked it! 🙂

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