She-The Gorgeous Chaos

She ain’t adorned with common elegance and grace.

She is a rare gorgeous chaos, a magical menace.

She ain’t a child, yet she dreams of fairies.

She hides her horcruxes in beautiful reveries.

In places unknown she has buried the pieces of her heart.

She ain’t a human, she is an imperfect art.

She isn’t fake, yes, she is insane.

She isn’t like us, she has fairy dust in her veins.

She ain’t that fearless, to not to be afraid.

But she ain’t that weak, to fear being betrayed.

She doesn’t carry an air of ecstatic aura around.

She is the music of your heart, a very dear twinkling sound.

Her eyes aren’t deep enough to be read by someone.

Her heart is too tender to be played with for fun.

She doesn’t sing songs glorifying her sinister fall.

She owns a mesmerizing, a radiant smile that says it all.

Wherever she goes, she leaves a little sparkle behind.

She ain’t ordinary, she’s got wars in her mind.

Her eyes don’t narrate tales of laughs and happy sighs.

But she doesn’t exaggerate her wounds and unheard cries.

Her fate ain’t wielded by someone, she writes her own destiny.

She is the perfect hue of pure souls soaked in colors of exquisite beauty.

She ain’t somebody to be easily found.

She is a magnificent mess, unreal and profound.

She ain’t adorned with common elegance and grace.

She is a rare gorgeous chaos, a magical menace.

 

-RIDDHIMA

 

via Daily Prompt: Radiant

33 Comments Add yours

  1. Enigma says:

    Okay, if you’re standing, please dear sit down because I am going to blabber.

    First of all, can I just tell you how magical this piece is? It is pure, naked magic. What is your secret? Did some elves aid you in the night? Girl, your writing is sprinkled by fairy dust itself.

    This post is beyond beautiful, it is extraordinary.

    Second of all, you’ve successfully managed to describe and elucidate the imperfect girls that exist. I am one, you’re one. We are not always like the clinche snappy snoopy novels. You deserve an award. *handing over a trophy (bonus with drum rolls)*

    Third and the last of all, this post has some of the beautiful lines that bewitches you and you captivate them in your heart.

    My favourite ones are:

    She ain’t a child, yet she dreams of fairies.
    She hides her horcruxes in beautiful reveries. (Horcruxes, are you sirius, deer? Always)

    Wherever she goes, she leaves a little sparkle behind.
    She ain’t ordinary, she’s got wars in her mind. (Exquisite!)

    Okay, are you still reading this?

    Amazing post, R!
    An exquisite creation laced with the imperfection of the girls that go unseen, adorned with the jewels of beautiful words.

    A gorgeous masterpiece!

    Love,
    Enigma

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    1. Oh my god, E!! (If you don’t mind me calling you that) You seriously have no idea about what I am feeling right now! 😊 I am on the top of the moon. I have a wide ear to ear smile on my face!! You know, it are feedbacks like yours which are a driving force and which motivate me to return back with the better every time!! Thank you for the lovely words . *Taking a bow(my smile widens)*. You are a sweetheart!! Your comments have always been very special and dear. I’ll inscribe these words of yours on my heart so that they always live within me reminding me of the love I get from adorable people like you!! You are a precious friend of mine!!
      A bear hug to you❤❤
      Lots of love
      Riddhima

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      1. Enigma says:

        *Returning the hug*
        You when somebody says that I made their day, it makes my day!

        Its a pleasure to read your post, R. It makes me happy so, I am just giving the credit where its due.
        Lots of Love,
        Enigma 🙂 ❤

        PS: No, I don't mind at all. E is super! Many people call me that!

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  2. Taru says:

    Beautifully written R!!❤❤
    Your poetry has always been a treat to read. But this is so so amazing. This has become my favourite one till date from your precious treasure box.Just loved it!💕

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    1. Thank you so much!!❤❤ You made my day!!😊❤

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  3. This is extraordinary.
    This is beautiful.
    This is surreal.
    This is magical.
    And to be honest I’m at a loss of words… This is a piece of art that has left me speechless.
    From the horcruxes and reveries to the stardust and fairies I loved this poem from the start!
    A masterpiece. I wonder how you never fail to paint such a beautiful picture Riddhima. Talent at its finest! 😍💜

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    1. Thanks a ton , Megha!! ❤Your words gave me immeasurable happiness!! So glad you liked it!!😊❤

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  4. Prashantt says:

    This is beyond beautiful, very well crafted with amazing thoughts process at such a younger age..you’ve a long way to go lil wordsmith.Keep writing!!📝👌👏☺

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    1. Thank you so much!! Your feedback really warmed my heart!!😊

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  5. ʞɐ says:

    This is umm…like the title, gorgeous.
    Beautifully penned.
    Every sentence is just too ecstatic. 🙂

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    1. Thanks a ton!!😊

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      1. ʞɐ says:

        You’re welcome. 😊

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  6. charisma says:

    This is not just beautiful, it’s absolutely a stunning piece of work, Riddhima.
    “She is a rare gorgeous chaos, a magical menace” You truely have a way with your words. You are a gem indeed. Be the mess you are and embrace it’s beauty. I absolutely love this verse.💕💕💕💕

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    1. Thanks a heap Charisma!!❤💕 It always feels so good to hear from you!!😊❤ Hope you’re doing good!😊

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      1. charisma says:

        Arreyy arreyy. Didi aur dost ko itna thanx nei bolte, Riddhima. It’s my pleasure anyday dear. 😘😘

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  7. Ridhima says:

    That’s so lovely piece Riddhima (I really love taking that name:))
    Firstly the title- remarkable and the way you play with words, that’s just incredible. The way you’ve painted such a beautiful image through your words, add my name in the list of your greatest admirers.you are really an artist in true sense.
    Lots of love
    Ridhima

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    1. Thank you so very much Ridhima! You warmed my heart!

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  8. “She ain’t a human. She is an imperfect art. “That line got me. Lovely lovely poetry ridhima 🙂

    Much love
    Riya

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    1. Thank you so so so very much Riya! 🙂

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  9. Wow what beautiful writing !! Riddhima, this is seriously superb ✨💫. You are a natural poet my friend. Please keep writing. I don’t know how much happiness I felt when I read your poem. Hugs to you my dear friend 🤗💕. Btw how much time did you take to come up with this beautiful poem ?

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    1. Thank you so much Abhijith!! . Well as far as the time is concerned, it took about 10 minutes to pen the original and about a minute or two to review and edit it.

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      1. Wow that’s so cool Riddhima. Reading it made my day 😊. Please do keep writing ✍️✨

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      2. Ah, thank you! I am happy to know that I made your day. I will keep writing, for sure. Have a great day ahead!

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      3. You too dear friend. I will be keeping watch of your posts daily 😇. Consider that you have got a loyal follower 😊✨

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      4. Okay, then! Glad to know that!

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      5. Ok dear friend. Take care and have an awesome day ahead 😇

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  10. What a poem !! Well written

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    1. Thank you!!😊❤

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