Our Everlasting Love

Hello readers! This post is special as it is my first Sonnet! I hope you’d like it! 🙂

 

I miss the tender appetency that lied between our souls;

Those times when we basked sunshine in cold.

I miss those silent and profound midnight strolls;

Those moments when I cherished your winsome hold.

 

We gazed at the starlit skies like astrophiles.

We were the photophiles who embraced the rhapsodic lights.

We were affected with tarantism in rains like pluviophiles.

We possessed the serendipity of finding smiles in crazy heights.

 

We were autophiles yet loved each other’s company.

We lived in our own insouciant cosmos.

Our elysian lives were adorned by an oneiric symphony.

Our everlasting love lives on forever, everyone knows.

 

Today I recount our memories and sigh,

As beside your grave I sit and cry.

 

-RIDDHIMA PENNER

27 Comments Add yours

  1. Just two lines in and this already have my heart in its grip. 😊
    Your chosen words are so exquisite and lovely in themselves, add your intricate and phenomenal weaving of them and you have a masterpiece!

    This is stunning dear, and the end just hurt so much.

    Loved this Riddhima! 💜

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    1. Aah!! Thank you so so much!😊❤️You brought an ear to ear smile on my face!😊 So glad you liked it!!
      The end, ikr! But this end was what made the whole thing more special!😊

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  2. Winnie says:

    This is beautifully penned! “Today I recount our memories and sigh

    As alone beside your grave I sit and cry”

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    1. Thank you so very much, Winnie!! ❤ 🙂

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      1. Winnie says:

        You’re welcome, Riddhima! 😊❤️

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  3. Shreya Vohra says:

    It is such a good one!
    I find it hard to believe that it’s your first attempt!🌸

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    1. Thank you so much!😊💕 It truly is!😊

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  4. This is so beautifully written. 🙂

    Looking forward to reading more of your words. 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much Enigma! 🙂

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      1. You’re welcome. 🙂

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  5. ambikabhardwaj says:

    Riddhima! How have you been? It’s a beautiful heart breaking piece. I have been on the go for a while. Have missed so much on your wonderful journey, how is it going for you?

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    1. Hi! Long time!😊 I’ve been as fresh as flowers and as bright as sunshine!😊💕 Thank you for the lovely words!😊❤ Hope everything is well at your end!😊❤

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      1. ambikabhardwaj says:

        Everything’s magical here! Travel and loads of it!

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  6. Rageshree says:

    Wow! This is wonderful❤️ I’ve got chills…

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    1. Thanks a bunch, Rageshree!! 🙂 ❤

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  7. Enigma says:

    Okay, first of all, I am wonderstruck. This piece is stringed with such beautiful words and emotions that it forms a perfect necklace of poetry. Second of all, the end was heartbreaking but the way you have described this entire piece fills me up with sighs and overwhelming sensations.

    Gorgeous piece of sonnet!

    Enigma 🙂 ❤

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    1. Okay, first of all, I’ve missed you sooo much!😄❤ It feels good to hear from you after so long. Will try and catch-up with your posts soon.😄
      Secondly, Thank you so very much for your heart-warming comment! ❤I feel really proud (Yes, cause your words of appreciation are no less than trophies!🏆)and am enveloped with unceasing joy to know that you liked it.😄

      Loads of love and hugs❤🤗
      Riddhima

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      1. Enigma says:

        It is always a pleasure to read something from you! I know, I missed the blogging community too.

        I had a severe writer’s block which is finally cured after a gazillion of months. How are you doing? I hope you post something soon.

        Love,
        Enigma 🙂 ❤

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      2. Congratulations for having overcome that writer’s block!😊
        I am fine. What about you?
        Yeah, actually I have my board exams the coming month while the pre-boards are still going on. So, just won’t make a promise I won’t be able to keep😄. Anyways, I’ll try and get back with another post soon.

        Love❤
        Riddhima

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      3. Enigma says:

        Well, I wish you all the very best for your examinations. May the odds ever be in your favour!

        I hope you post soon. Keep Writing!

        Enigma 🙂

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      4. Thank you so much E!! 😊❤

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  8. This is going to be my favourite. I believe poetry is an art purely created to cherish love and its a beautiful beautiful compliment to that conception of mine. Woww❤️

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    1. Thank you sooo much!!😊
      Aarav, what I believe is that poetry is a celebration in itself, a celebration not only of light, of life, of friends, or of love but also of the darkness, of pain, and the millions of unique feelings and creatures that exist!❤
      Poetry is simply so beautiful, ain’t it?

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      1. Cannot agree more, it’s just that I love writing and reading about love and with poetry is just seems too much reall❤️, in simple words , love consists of everything in poetry, and poetry is much beyond our imaginations‼️

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